Below is an example of the editing I can do for you. My edits are in blue., as well as the strikeouts. Please note that this was not a paper I personally worked on. Rather, the paper, as it was COVID-19-related. was published on-line by Nature in 2022 ahead of the final editing by their editorial and production staffs. I used this opportunity to edit the Abstract as an illustration of what kind of service I can offer my clients. I can edit your entire paper along these lines, if you so wish. Again, the edits below are purely for illustration, but I would encourage you to compare my edits below with the final edited version of the paper by the Nature staff - see PMID: 35940203.